Thursday, 24 April 2014


Innocence taken away.
A shadow of agony as memories bleed.
Once we tasted heaven,
wide-eyed and hand in hand,
but my love has perished.
In a sickening vision of darkness –
love is followed by death, death followed by blood,
A life burnt to ashes in a haze of sorrow,
I still miss you.


  1. beautiful and I love the description and visual of your piece.

    "A shadow of agony as memories bleed."

    I love that phrase, especially the memories bleed. It's such an interesting view of it. Keep writing!!! :)

    1. Thanks a lot. I'm glad you like it. I wasn't sure how well this one would go down. It's a bit different to what I usually write.